Score: 0

"Dude..."

submission: Mr. Snowman

date: May 25, 2005

First off...flash has spell checking features. Secondly, this file is about 10 times as large as it needs to be. Go look up how to compress stuff in flash. I'm sorry but I didn't appreciate the joke or the flash.

Score: 2

"Not much effort put in."

submission: Modern Hentai Quiz

date: May 25, 2005

Where from hentai is?? Did you mean "where is hentai from?" I guess English isn't your first language.

I liked the music but the quiz was ridiculously easy and pointless. There were only two images and I doubt this took you more than a few minutes to make. Put a little effort into your flash and you might go places!

Score: 4

"needs a little work"

submission: Little Benny's Adventure

date: May 25, 2005

This was okay. The character needed to move about 3 times as fast as he did and there should've been better instructions. I didn't know how to get across the river and he moved too slowly for me to care to look for a way across.

Score: 10

"I love DDR!!!!"

submission: Onigirl DDR 24

date: May 25, 2005

DDR and other beat games are vastly underappreciated in the USA. I wish there were more people like you who show a proper appreciation to the genre.

Score: 5

"One word..."

submission: Garden Centaur

date: May 25, 2005

Backgrounds! White in the back is distracting, annoying and it looks like you put no effort into it! Please make backgrounds next time and It'll be much better next time. The rest of the entry wasn't so bad so don't ruin it for such a small thing.

Score: 4

"You would have done a lot better if..."

submission: Turd of the week sailing.

date: May 25, 2005

you just hadn't stated that you were going for turd of the week!! Your animaton and graphics were decent. Next time try a little harder and go for a worthwhile award.

Score: 9

"Great!"

submission: Mask

date: May 25, 2005

This is very good!! I'm surprised it was rushed as the entry was almost perfect. Nice selection of music and I always enjoy a good story without any words. The only real flaw I saw was the overused theme of waking up from a dream (I was even worried that was where you were going). It would've been nice if it had some other ending.

Score: 4

"a little too slow..."

submission: Is That Coffee?

date: May 24, 2005

This went very slowly. Yours probably didn't make the front page (I noticed you reviewed a front page flash and said yours should be in the front page) because not only is it slow but the art is only okay and the animation was sub-par. People who view the front page often want an episode where things happen quickly with good animation and graphics. No offense but your statement sounded a bit cocky.

It wasn't bad but it could use improvement! Remember that the average person's attention span is very bad.

Score: 9

"very good!"

submission: Bones

date: May 23, 2005

Your art is very beautiful; it belied the morbid nature of your movie. The joke was pretty funny but also rather horrible at the same time. The poor poodle got blown to bits and the other dog just took her bones and buried them! Pretty gross.

I wish I could acheive your level of art...How did you make it? Hand drawn? Adobe Illustrator?

Score: 4

"Same thing as last submitted...only dubbed!!"

submission: The Big Menace

date: May 20, 2005

Did you know that you can update movies without resubmitting them?

Please...get rid of the annoying cartoon sounds next time. Plus, none of the poor translations were fixed. This would've been much better if you had listened to people in your last submission and updated these things too!!!