Score: 4

"Not too bad"

submission: Mega Man gets fired Pt. 2

date: May 18, 2005

It was pretty good. Unfortunately, it's nothing new (which is tough on a site with as much diversity as newgrounds). The biggest let-down was the ending. I felt like it just ended without any explanation why anything happened and without even seeing megaman get his job back. If you work a bit harder and put a little more thought into your story, I can see good things coming from you someday.

Score: 5

"This would've been better for an opening"

submission: Dark Park 1

date: May 15, 2005

The entire flash was very well done but it was too short for an action based movie. I enjoyed your killing spree series and those did very well on NG. One reason they did well was because they were long enough so that stuff actually happened.

You have a lot of skill...probably too much to still be only doing stick figures. After this series is done, it would be nice to see you broaden your horizens and do a series with characters other than sticks(Yes, I know you have done animation with drawn characters but it hasn't been a whole series).

Score: 8

"Much better...."

submission: Captain prego II

date: May 15, 2005

I remember reviewing a movie of yours over a year ago. The english was almost always unintelligable then. For this movie, your English often made sense. Still there were many nonsensical lines and bad English. Like "It's my time now". What does that mean??

The graphics were improved and overall the animation was decently funny. Good job. Keep it up!! Your animations are definitely good.

Score: 7

"lol, so true"

submission: The Hippy Song

date: May 12, 2005

We don't have to be experts at flash (or just because we don't have anything posted doesn't mean we don't know our stuff) to critisize!! Just like neither ebert nor roeper ever made a movie yet they're two of the most famous movie critics. We judge it by our likes and dislikes, not by how difficult it was to make something! I completely agree with you :-). If you can't take a serious review then don't submit your flash!

Anyway, I liked all the pretty colors in your flash :-P.

Score: 5

"Not bad for a beginner"

submission: This is really hard...

date: April 27, 2005

Heh...cute. It seemed like some thought was put into it! When you have more time, try for some sound and some better drawings/animation.

Score: 9

"yay!"

submission: Hoy te amo ++

date: April 8, 2005

I haven't reviewed a movie in months but I really enjoyed this one enough to review it!

I loved the excellent upbeat music! It was also really great to see her just walking along for some reason but then it was weird to see her suddenly holding a sword and fighting some strange robot. Oh well, I don't get the story but I definitely enjoyed the flash anyway.

Score: 10

"hahahaha"

submission: The Picard Song (Lokken)

date: July 7, 2004

hahahahahahaha
funny. Great song.

Score: 7

"okay"

submission: Skuka - Uberfox Ep. 1

date: April 23, 2004

This is pretty good. However, I would've liked more backstory and maybe some info about the world you've created. One thing that I did not like was that it made no sense for the guy to spare him. Why would he do that when he told him that he was going to kill him and he had no apparent reason for sparing him considering that they did not know each other.

Score: 10

"Oh wow"

submission: Twisted Punch

date: April 21, 2004

You're the same guy who co-authored xin! I love that series.
This entry is a huge leap upward, graphically, from xin. I wonder how you improved so much? You must've spent a lot of time on this. This is a really beautiful entry and is currently my favorite animation on NG. Great story and simply adorable. I must see more from you. Awesome job.

Score: 5

"some things that you might want to think about"

submission: l0l

date: April 18, 2004

1) More than one user can have diety status if they happen to be ranked exactly the same.

2) You didn't explain what it meant to be "blammed" or "saved" until you got to voting. Considering people read things from left to right (normally) this might confuse a true newbie.

3) The explanation on BBS was somewhat sparse. If I was a newb, I would look at it and just be like "Umm...okay". What about BBS signatures? Where is the BBS located? etc.

4) It would've been nice to see an explanation on portal awards.

5) What about the audio portal?