Score: 2

"umm..."

submission: Where is Saddam?

date: July 6, 2003

Do you know how big iraq is? Granted...compared to the USA it's very small. But to search all of iraq is an insane task. Can you even imagine how many places he could hide those things if he's willing to put military targets near schools, hospitals and other places where civilians could get killed. Those weapons could be underground or they could be in someone's closet! Impossible to search all of iraq so really, it's impossible to prove one way or another that iraq had WMDs. Saddam was uncoorperative and could've posed a significant threat. In the end, it was only an issue if it was likely that he poses a serious threat. I think it went without question that saddam didn't care for the lives of people. He didn't coorperate with weapons inspectors so he definitely could've been hiding those weapons. Obviously he had something to hide because he wouldn't follow the treaty he signed. Anyway, there's so much evidence of him buying material that would only be useful to iraq if they were building weapons. There's also the issue that they did find missiles that were capable of going beyond the range that was allowed to Iraq. As for the rest of the flash: too short and it wasn't entertaining or interesting. Sorry.

Score: 0

"that was so great that"

submission: Turner Animation Short #1

date: June 29, 2003

the only way that I can think of to make this better would be if you had never made it at all

Score: 6

"w00t"

submission: random deaths

date: June 29, 2003

This was really pointless. But because some of it reminded me of worms and one of the guys who died looked like the aol guy, I decided it deserved an okay score.

Score: 7

"Good but..."

submission: The Necromancer Episode 4

date: June 29, 2003

Hey, you really seem to put your heart into your flash. I have some problems with your series though. Generally your images aren't that well drawn. The only well drawn image is the girl vampire. I'm thinking you must've traced her or at least copied her from somewhere. Anyway, I would suggest for the next series that you practice drawing the characters you wish to make over and over again until you get them just right. You'll become a better drawer this way and it will make it a lot easier to get your future drawings to look good. Drawing really does require practice...maybe you should spend some time studying a book on drawing or maybe just spend time looking at a picture, trying to see what makes it look like it does. What gives it that realistic feeling, then try to emulate it. Later, you can play with modifying stuff to make it look better than it was but that's after you're confident in your abilities. You should also find new sound files for your deaths because it sounds just like defend your castle as it was and that sound can get REALLY annoying after a while. I like that you have a story but you have to admit that it's not the deepest story in the world. You spend much more time showing fighting and death than furthering along your story. It wasn't mentioned in this episode but in previous episodes you kept saying necromancer. You pronounced it wrong. Knee-cromancer is never a proper way to pronounce it. It's Neck-romancer. This really annoyed me considering that you have a whole series based on it. If you don't believe me then check any dictionary and it should confirm that I'm right. Don't take this the wrong way. I do like your series but I think it could be improved a great deal.

Score: 3

"The series has gotten old"

submission: Retarded Animal Babies 4

date: June 28, 2003

All your jokes seem like the same joke over and over again from previous episodes. You should give up on this series while you're ahead. This entry wasn't funny at all. Another thing, infinity times zero can be infinity, it can be zero or it can be anything in between. You just took it for granted that it was zero. How can you multiply infinity man by a number anyway(it wasn't actually zero but the null sign, I can't understand why you did that)? Well, all your jokes are just random stupid comments and situations after all.

Score: 9

"I love it!"

submission: Sakiria #14

date: June 25, 2003

For anyone who hasn't seen the other comics...This will make almost NO sense unless you see the other strips at his site. The story hasn't been completely developed yet so there are some things that still remain a mystery (don't bash it for that, it adds suspense to the story) even if you do read the other comics. I like your art and it looks like this may end up being a great story. They're just sooo short! The story moves along so slowly. Oh well :-). I look forward to your future strips.

Score: 7

"I like your stuff"

submission: sakiria #13

date: June 25, 2003

Some people seem to be confused about the story for this. Well, that's because you haven't seen the rest of the comics! They're here http://www.sakiria.com/ or you can click on the author's site link. They're kindof a different style of comic.

Score: 5

"Too large a file size"

submission: Gates of Hell

date: June 22, 2003

I hope the intro there won't be 3.7 megs. I would suggest you reduce the quality/loop the music. No one wants to wait for that much to load, especially if you don't have broadband. I thinkthe rest of the staff could've used color and the ball needed some color effect like try diffuse and perhaps gradients to give it a glowing look. Add color to the guys hair who was hanging, also. That would've made it look better imo.

Score: 8

"short but sweet"

submission: Domestic Dispute

date: June 22, 2003

I don't know what it was but I just really liked this game. The moves could've been much much better than they were. The guy had a freaking cleaver and he didn't even use it in any of his moves! The animation style was so sadistically cute though. The music fit well too. I got the impression that a lot of this stuff was inside jokes. Anyway, great job with this.

Score: 5

"Work a bit more on it"

submission: Jedi Joe.

date: June 21, 2003

Some tips: Add color please, Add more details(it's about as detailed as a stick movie), Add backgrounds, Make the story clearer, Give us an idea of the setting (no idea where or what time period this takes place in).